Wednesday 27 February 2013

Inspiration

My film opening script sees 3/4 girls explaining a horrible story that happened to them, and they each say a line or two each, which then links to what the other girl has to say. Almost as if the girls are finishing each others sentences. I lifted this idea and made it my own from the film '50 first Dates', a comedy starring Adam Sandler and Drew Barrymore. The opening sequence of this films sees the girls in a scenario where they have all spent a week with Sandler's character, Henry Roth. They are all telling someone the same story of their time spent with him, and seem to be completing the sentence of the girl in the previous scene. I also gained inspiration in the fact that the main character does not immediately appear in the opening. 

Here is the opening: 

I find this style of scripting and editing effective because it really draws the audience member into the film straight away because they wonder what the characters are talking about, and why they all have it in common despite not knowing each other. 
While there will be some similarities with my piece and this, the style of script and the main character not being shown until the final few seconds, the two will be different. Firstly, the genres are completely opposite, and the context and story line are very different. Secondly, this style was used for a comedic affect, whereas mine will be for more of a horror effect. There are also far more characters in this sequence than there will be in mine, and mine will involve flash backs instead of just dialogue. 

Tuesday 19 February 2013

Film Opening Script- UPDATED- "Avenue 62"



 (V.O) GIRL 1
 it was…about a month ago

EXT.- DARK EMPTY STREET- NIGHT- FLASHBACK
Dark empty back alley, girl walking alone on the pathway, footsteps can be heard closely behind her
 
INT.-LIVING ROOM- DAY-PRESENT
A young girl sits alone in a brightly lit living room, the expression on her face is one of sadness and nervousness. She is holding a mobile phone to her ear.


GIRL 2
I was on my way home

EXT.- DARK EMPTY STREET-NIGHT-FLASHBACK
Different girl walking alone, hears footsteps close to her and swiftly turns around with a frightened look on her face


INT.- BEDROOM-DAY-PRESENT
A girl is sitting alone on her bed, leaning against a wall. She looks tired and saddened. She is writing in a small diary. 

 (V.O) GIRL 1
 I don’t like the dark…so I took a shortcut

EXT.- DARK EMPTY STREET-NIGHT-FLASHBACK
A girl looks around cautiously with a frightened look upon her face, she turns around and starts walking a little bit faster than before

 (V.O) GIRL 3
 I heard… something…someone

INT.-BEDROOM 2-DAY-PRESENT
Two girls are sitting opposite ends of the bed, one girl is close to tears and the other is providing a comforting look 
GIRL 3
I should have been walking faster

EXT.- DARK EMPTY STREET-NIGHT-FLASHBACK
Girl being pushed to the ground by unseen figure, her face is decorated with bruises and cuts.
 (V.O) GIRL 1
 I was left there to die

INT.-LIVING ROOM- DAY-PRESENT
GIRL 2
The thing is, I never saw a single person
*person on the phone* 
Where did this happen?!

INT.-BEDROOM 2-DAY-PRESENT
GIRL 3
Avenue 62

INT.-LIVING ROOM- DAY-PRESENT
GIRL 2
Avenue 62

INT.- BEDROOM-DAY-PRESENT
(V.O) GIRL 1
…Avenue 62

EXT.-PARK-DAY-PRESENT
A young, fair haired girl is quietly sitting on a park bench, buried deep into a book. The wind is lightly blowing her hair across her face, and she keeps brushing it out of the way.


Directors notes: Girls

To ensure that the cast of any film/television programme/play to correctly portray the character well, the director must tell them exactly how they want them to look, act and what to wear. I've started out by making these notes for the girl cast members in both scenes they will appear in:

Walking down the street, being attacked:

Voices: There will be no dialogue in this scene, however they will have to gasp and shriek in horror and breathe heavily. While the attack is happening they will have to scream (which will be added in later).
Facial Expressions: Whilst walking down the street, they should look unphased by their surroundings. Upon hearing footsteps behind them, they should then start to look worried, their walking speeding up slightly and dart their eyes worriedly. Once the attacker reaches them their faces should be ones of horror- closed eyes and wide open mouths, screaming.
Makeup: As far as the story goes, the girls have just left work/ a friends etc, so their make up would be relaxed and how they would look everyday. Some of them will look natural, the others more glamorous.
Clothes: Pretty much the same as stated above. They shall be wearing paler colours such as white, cream, pale pink and blue etc to symbolise a kind of innocence in the girls. They should also be wearing jackets to symbolise the coldness of night.


Writing in the diary:

The actress in this particular scene will have a pained look upon her face and be breathing heavily whilst remembering the horrid experience. Her eyes will be filled with tears although she will not actually be crying, instead fighting back tears by frequently closing her eyes and blinking. Because she will be writing in her diary, there won't be any dialogue in this scene, so she will be writing hurriedly and messily. This character in particular will have faced the most emotional trauma, thus she is writing her feelings in her diary as she doesn't want to tell anyone what happened. She will have also experienced a lack of sleep, therefore her makeup would involve dark circles under the eyes and a pale skin tone. As far as clothes go, she will be wearing clothes that would be worn around the house to relax in, and they will be darker colours than before to symbolise the mourning of her innocent view of the world.

Talking on the phone:

The girl who is talking on the phone to her friend will have a similar look about her as the girl writing in her diary- dark clothes, worn out makeup and hair. However, because often speaking to someone about your problems sometimes causes emotions to come out, she will be crying, but not so her voice is affected; instead it will just be shaky.

Talking to her friend:

Instead of following the same hair and makeup scheme as the previous two girls, she will be slightly more made up, e.g wearing more makeup and dressing casually. This is to try to hide her pain in front of her friend so make her look and feel stronger, even though she isn't. She will too, however, have a saddened, confused look upon her face when she talks, and she will speak slowly and deeply, with her head down. Her and her friend will be sitting on opposite ends of her bed in her bedroom.

Slight Change...

Over the past few days I have been thinking more about my script and idea as a whole and while I still want to keep the story line the same, I have decided to make a few changes to the script.

Whats changing:

  • Instead of having 6 girls, I have decided to only have 4, simply to make it easier to film and also so that the girls will get more time on screen so that the audience can connect with them more.
  • I have also decided that the girls will not be telling their story to a psychiatrist anymore, instead, one will be on the phone to her best friend, confiding her story to her, one will be writing secretly in her diary because she is embarrassed, and the other will be talking face to face with her friend. I feel that this makes the story of the girls more personal and also real, because most people would tell the ones they love and trust about something horrible that's happened to them. I think this makes the situation more realistic. 
  • Also, although it is not included in the script, I have decided not to go with the unoriginal idea of having a flashback in black and white, instead the sound will be echoed and the colour will just be duller than that of the present day.
Whats staying the same:

  • The girls will still be voicing their similar story at different times, they will each just get more lines than before. 
  • The flashbacks of the attack will still happen on a road at night time, and there will still be eerie mood music playing in the background of these, to add to the genre of psychological thriller. 
  • The lines are pretty much the same with the same context, they have only been slightly altered.
  • The title is still 'Avenue 62' and it remains the focus of the film
  • The overall main character will only be shown in the last few seconds, as a sort of setup for the rest of the film. 

Friday 15 February 2013

Character Development- Main Character


My film opening contains around 8 characters- 6 girls who act as victims and 2 males; a psychiatrist and a mentally unstable attacker. However, there is a noticable absence of a main character. The main character of a film serves as a point of focus in a film and the audience positions themselves with them. If my project somehow turned into a full length 90-or-so minute long film, the main character would not appear in the films opening 2 minutes, which isn't usually the case.
However, I feel it necessary to create a background for the eventual main character of the film, just so the audience can pre-position themselves with her even though they may only see about 5 seconds of her in the opening. So here is her background:

Full name: Jasmine Cynthia Harrison
Age: 18 and 3/4
Appearance: Shortish blonde hair, petite figure, bright blue eyes, pale skin, typical English Rose
Hometown: A quaint town a few miles NW of London
Parents: Olivia and John Harrison
Education: Reasonably good GCSE and A Level grades
Current living situation: Living with a roommate in student acomodation at university
Career: Hopes to be a journalist, currently doing work experience in between a part-time university course.
Likes: Coffee, books, quiet places, thick jumpers, bright nails
Dislikes: Untidiness, being in doors for too long, wasps, storms
Hobbies: Painting, reading, watching films, walking
If she had to describe herself in one word: Laid-back


Tuesday 5 February 2013

Storyboard (Draft)

Here is a mock up version of my storyboard for my film opening:

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It contains 8 sections, some split into two or more individual frames. It is a rough version and a final version will be completed and uploaded.
*Where is says (F.B, B/W) it means Flach Back, and Black and White

Preliminary Task

This is our preliminary task. For this task , we had to use a match on action shot and a shot/reverse shot in order to show our understanding of the two and know how to use them effectively.
The two actresses- Zoe and Lucy, then constructed a typical conversation about a recent party so that shot/reverse shot could be used.

Here is the video: